Act 1:
title: Varun realises he has a tummy
Wakes up as always and then gets ready for office .. and during the shirt tucking ceremony identifies that if he tucks his shirt his tummy pouch is quite obvious. So, refuses to tuck in and then leaves for the office preferring informals to formals.
Arun: It's a Monday and you are coming like this..
Varun: You don't have this tummy, so you can't understand my problem... (and taps his tummy)
(the shot is done indoor and then when Varun and Arun leave with their laptop bags, the shot is preferably done from the terrace..i.e from a higher location)
Act 2:
title: In a huddle-room
(the shot is done in some huddle room where Krishna, Arun and Varun when Dileep enters the room)
Dileep: So, how are we planning to handle the CUSTOM pll packaging. Seems like yesterday's pack had overwritten the customizations introduced in the previous pack. Buggers, please change your MD120 in such a way that old code is not deleted from the code unit.
(Dileep spots Varun in casuals)
Dileep: Dude of the nation, this is Monday and you have come in casuals..
Okay guys, get the pack ready in another hour for client-release.
(And shouts on the phone, ) Sunil bugger, wait for me, I am coming for the smoke..
Act 3:
title: Wakes up early for gymming
(The alarm rings with LedZep's "Kashmir" ringtone and Varun wakes up with all the energy at 6 am... gets ready)...
(V starts his rather slow jog on the street, but seeing a dog he just starts to walk )
(V reaches office and does the climb to 9th floor via stairs and breathes heavily when he reaches the gym, taps his tummy and starts cycle-pedaling ... )
Act 4:
title: And the story continues everyday
(V runs on the running machine and the fm radio in the gym room gives him company.. , along the pressing his tummy to check if it has reduced..)
Act 5:
title: V reaches home after one of those usual runs but now looking a lot slimmer and of course tired
Arun: What's wrong with you? Why are you over-doing your exercises... hang on.. i think your face has gone out of shape..
(Varun gets all worked up when he hears the 'face deformity part' .. and goes infront of the mirror and can't figure out anything)
Varun: Moron.. what do you mean ? Guess, it's looking all okay
Arun: No, your left-jaw is much longer than the right-one.. never noticed this earlier in you.. guess, it has to be related to some wrong exercise technique.. anyway, got some work, bye da..
(Varun just gapes at the mirror)
Act 6:
title: Jaws up-close
(In the gym, he goes infront of the mirror, now he knows the tummy is not his concern which is now in controlled shape, but the jaw is not.. and just wonders why it is like that.. )
Varun: Damn.. Arun...
Act 7:
title: In the bay
(Varun is working infront of his laptop in his bay and that's when Deepika starts up a conversation )
Deepika: So, any plans for the weekend ... ?
(holds his chin in 'rodin's thinking man' posture and replies..
Varun: Nothing much, though planning to play tennis..
(Deepika leaves in disgust.. )
Act 8:
title: Stares
(Varun reading newspaper in the reception and a girl passes by who just stares at Varun, Varun is not sure if it is the jaw that the girl just stared.. so just holds his chin.. )
Act 9:
title: V gets an email forward from Neemit in his gmail id, with subject as 'Deepika Padukone ***Careful'..
(Varun opens the mail and scrolls through the clips, but he stops scrolling and gets real close to the laptop to check one photo.. - Bach's "air on the g string" in the background)
Varun: Ah, the jaws and smiles..
(Varun notices that Deepika's left-jaw is also longer than her right.. and realises it's the same for all )
Saturday, December 01, 2007
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14 comments:
Sancha, amazingly well written!! The subtle humor (without any hehe or haha or even a wink)keeps the reader glued till the end. Your post worked as an awesome companion for my bed tea..! :)
Well built up!! amazing wat u can do to a two liner story :D
Dude.. put this way, it sounds cool! :) Nice write up!
nice flow da Santosh... well written. I found it partucularly funny becaz I know Dileep Raghavan...
Amazing Dude(V).. And Sancho keep up the good work :) Expecting more from you ;)
Hmm...never knew the left jaw is longer than the right..guess I still cud learn some things from u :D...nice one da...so how long did varun GYM??
Oye, ur imaginations can go any heights i guess ! The subtle humour is super, esp the part where Dileep jus by passes the fact that Varun is not in formals:)If somebody is in a bad mood n reads this, am sure they wil be lookin for u after tat, not sure wit wat intentions though !;)BEWARE!!!
Buddy ....
Nice one ...
took me back to Mantri for a while ...
scena irukuda :)
Very well written. But i still dont think Varun has a tummy ;) Dileep's character was the best etched one.
Dude... fantastic stuff.... Geez... it has gr8 flow to it... Way to go... :D
dude .. kickass .. esp the part where you take the shot from terrace .. was jus imagining how it would look in real .. ur script n direction r .. kickass ..
Great work dude ! I never knew you did humour as well..keep it flowing & keep us posted on how Varun's gym-ing goes ! :)
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